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Love is a gift
But you have to give it in return
Love is a duty
But it is also a responsibility
Love is a relief
But it's also a hardship
Love is amazing
But it's also the opposite

Love causes happiness
But it also causes fights
Love causes children
But children change your lives
Love causes butterflies, hearts, and freedom
But it also causes you to be absent minded
Love causes changes change
And it's not good to turn back

Love leads to divorce
You can divorce
But who wants to?

Divorce makes others unhappy
Divorce makes you unhappy
Divorce makes you alone
Divorce makes the children sad
Divorce changes the children
Divorce changes you
Divorce is bad
Or at least, to me.

Does that mean love is bad?
No, one must just be careful
And you must be sure before
You choose any choice

That's what love means
This is the first thing I have written about love. What do you think?

(C) VivaFariy
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Coca-Cola-Caffeine Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
WHOA! This is really cool! I love how every line correlates with the one before and after, especially at the end. Great job :D
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Thank you so much!
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MorganeStudio Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really awesome poem. So much thought comes out of it, and it's all really too. Good job!!
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
YOu like it! I'm flattered.
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MorganeStudio Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
..Hum.. Why?
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
It's thr first thing of that type that I've written. I didn't know if it was good.
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LlamaColombiana Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww. That was...powerful. and very lovely. It has a very good message. Awesome poem. :heart:
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.
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LlamaColombiana Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! ^^
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bandie729 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow that is really good :D
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