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Why do I feel so cheated?
Why does it seem so unfair?
I'm told I'm on break
So Why does it take
So long till I can read or play?
I know there are chores,
Those I can't ignore
But why so much Home Work?
That is such a bore!
Math and Literature
History and more
I get so frustrated,
I want to throw it on the floor.
Gotta memorize four stories that I've never read before!
Book Report, Research report,
All due right after break
Gotta do it all.
How long will it take!
And....
My sister is nagging me to play
Almost all day.
Why do I feel so cheated?
Why does it seem so unfair?
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HopesForFun777 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
Everyone feels that way sometimes. It might help to think of homework as your second job--school is your first. The work is involuntary and pays nothing, but like all work, it must be done.

I had those frustrated, self-pitying moment even at college! But they were rare. Over time one gets used to ignoring those feelings and thoughts. They're counter-productive and self-defeating b/c they waste your time, shorten your free time.
Nice work.
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012
Thank you.
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fishcake-y Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
So true! Sheehs I hate home work, and it wastes prefectly good trees!
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uniquelylost Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
So true! I would like to invite you to our writing community [link]
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Thank you for inviting me! I might not be active, but I will try to be. :giggle: Hopefully!
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taliV1436 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Student Photographer
Great work. ;) I have to say, I'm impressed that you took out your frustration in a poem. I, unfortunately, sometimes take it out by lashing out on everyone.. :blushes: But I'm working on it.. haha. And btw, keep writing! You'll be amazed how much you can accomplish if you just try. I look forward to seeing more pieces in your gallery. :D
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
Really! That is one of the first things I could ever write worth posting at all! I'm trying to write more... I really am. I write in class and my writing is very good, when I can get an idea. I barely get ideas.
By the way, i also take it out on people, not usually writing.
Thanks A lot!
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ink-eternity Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
honestly, who doesn't hate homework?XD i like it though, it flowed very nicely.*nods*
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011
thanks
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ink-eternity Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob.^^
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