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Delilah's Casual outfit by VivaFariy Delilah's Casual outfit by VivaFariy
This is my OC Delilah's Casual outfit. I worked really hard on it and I'm satisfied.

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BASE: :iconhyperster:
Shirt Design: adopted from :icontypedoutmute:
Delilah and Drawing: :iconvivafariy:
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:iconroxy-13:
First of all, it's a good improvement.

But, as others have mentioned, in order to clean up your lines, use a pen tool. In GiMP, which I use as well, there is the Paths Tool. You can use this to curve and to trace lines. A note about the lines, a huge note: Don't make the lines of the clothing bigger than the lines of the base. It looks off and can be easily rectified by selecting a thinner stroking line.

Outlines are always a good thing to have- it gives it a more clean appearance.

In terms of the clothing, very cute. But you don't have to list credits on the image.

Hyperster has many bases in the .psd format- these make it very easy to change skin color, eye color, etc, when you lock the layer's transparency. Try utilizing this function next time. (need help? Note me.)
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AlisyaMagix Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The design is really nice! especially those shoes!!:squee:
Tip - make the top and bottom outline thiner and add outline to the hair,
but since you use gimp, which don't have a curve tool i think that's okay!;) but like I said, NICE!!
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
Thank you!!!
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AlisyaMagix Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! :hug: you'll better using it in a matter of time! ^_^
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
Thanks
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AlisyaMagix Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome
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musaintecna Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
It's prefect!
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:iconvivafariy:
VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
Thank you so much!
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ElizabethCloud Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE the style. If you would Like, I could redraw the picture. While I do that, I could do another casual or pajams. Only 3 points.
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Thanks and sure.
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ElizabethCloud Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ok. It will be uploaded today or tomorrow.
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:iconvivafariy:
VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Thanks! (Wait, another pic of this outfit?)
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ElizabethCloud Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Redraw of that pic above, and a new outfit
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:iconvivafariy:
VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Awesome! What's the new outfit?
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ElizabethCloud Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Surprise!
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Can't wait!
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fernpawiscool Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Hey there Delilah what's it like in New York City
I'm a thousand miles away
But girl tonight you look so pretty, yes you do
Times Square can't shine as bright as you, I swear it's true

Hey there Delilah don't you worry about the distance
I'm right there if you get lonely give this song another listen
Close your eyes, listen to my voice it's my disguise
I'm by your side

Oh it's what you do to me
Oh it's what you do to me
Oh it's what you do to me
Oh it's what you do to me
What you do to me

Hey there Delilah, I know times are getting hard
But just believe me girl, someday I'll pay the bills with this guitar
We'll have it good, we'll have the life we knew we would
My word is good

Hey there Delilah ,I've got so much left to say
If every simple song I wrote to you
Would take your breath away, I'd write it all
Even more in love with me you'd fall, we'd have it all

Oh it's what you do to me
Oh it's what you do to me
Oh it's what you do to me
Oh it's what you do to me

A thousand miles seems pretty far
But they've got planes and trains and cars
I'd walk to you if I had no other way
Our friends would all make fun of us
And we'll just laugh along because we know
That none of them have felt this way

Delilah I can promise you
That by the time that we get through
The world will never ever be the same
And you're to blame

Hey there Delilah
You be good and don't you miss me
Two more years and you'll be done with school
And I'll be making history like I do

You'll know it's all because of you
We can do whatever we want to
Hey there Delilah here's to you
This one's for you

Oh it's what you do to me
Oh it's what you do to me
Oh it's what you do to me
Oh it's what you do to me
What you do to me= lololoolol my friend or Delilah's boyfriend))
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
LOL
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fernpawiscool Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Yeah ikr!?! It's really akward my friend is leb.))
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goldensirenix101 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its REALLY CUTE!
I really like the sparkles and the hair and the shoes~
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Thank you so much! The shoes are :iconzinxclubalexa:'s design though.
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goldensirenix101 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welcome the shoes are fine i prefer the hair and outfit mire than the shoes.
The shoes are pretty good its just the lines not that straight but can't blame you hard to make straight lines!
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Thank you so much.
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goldensirenix101 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Anytime! Keep making more!
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:iconvivafariy:
VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
I will!
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goldensirenix101 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great! :D
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artfan1298 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Love her hair and her outfit :D
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Thanks so much!
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ShimmeringMagic Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's nice but I would also use the curve tool. ;)
It's in Paint tool Sai and in Paint.Net too.. ;)
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
I use GIMP. Is the curve too there and what is it? I only use the path tool, the fuzzy tool thing, pain brush, pencil, and bucket.
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ShimmeringMagic Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
paint.net is a free programe.. There is a curve tool that makes clean and nice lines.. If you don't use this.. Try to make the outlines thinner.. ;)
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Oh - on gimp its called the path tool. I use it already, just for this outfit when I stroked the path I stroked it very thickly because its her style.
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Roxy-13 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
GiMP has the Path tool.
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MysticalStardust Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The design is very cool.
But do you know how to use the Line tool, It would make your line-art so much clearer. ^^
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
I don't know what the line tool is or how to use it. I use the path tool though.
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MysticalStardust Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you use Gimp or Photoshop? ^^
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Gimp
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MysticalStardust Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll find a few tutorials for you to work with. ^^
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VivaFariy Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
Oh, thanks. *sigh* I am hopeless. I've already been given a very thorough and amazing tutorial, but I'm still horrible.
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