But, as others have mentioned, in order to clean up your lines, use a pen tool. In GiMP, which I use as well, there is the Paths Tool. You can use this to curve and to trace lines. A note about the lines, a huge note: Don't make the lines of the clothing bigger than the lines of the base. It looks off and can be easily rectified by selecting a thinner stroking line.
Outlines are always a good thing to have- it gives it a more clean appearance.
In terms of the clothing, very cute. But you don't have to list credits on the image.
Hyperster has many bases in the .psd format- these make it very easy to change skin color, eye color, etc, when you lock the layer's transparency. Try utilizing this function next time. (need help? Note me.)
The design is really nice! especially those shoes!! Tip - make the top and bottom outline thiner and add outline to the hair, but since you use gimp, which don't have a curve tool i think that's okay! but like I said, NICE!!
Hey there Delilah what's it like in New York City I'm a thousand miles away But girl tonight you look so pretty, yes you do Times Square can't shine as bright as you, I swear it's true
Hey there Delilah don't you worry about the distance I'm right there if you get lonely give this song another listen Close your eyes, listen to my voice it's my disguise I'm by your side
Oh it's what you do to me Oh it's what you do to me Oh it's what you do to me Oh it's what you do to me What you do to me
Hey there Delilah, I know times are getting hard But just believe me girl, someday I'll pay the bills with this guitar We'll have it good, we'll have the life we knew we would My word is good
Hey there Delilah ,I've got so much left to say If every simple song I wrote to you Would take your breath away, I'd write it all Even more in love with me you'd fall, we'd have it all
Oh it's what you do to me Oh it's what you do to me Oh it's what you do to me Oh it's what you do to me
A thousand miles seems pretty far But they've got planes and trains and cars I'd walk to you if I had no other way Our friends would all make fun of us And we'll just laugh along because we know That none of them have felt this way
Delilah I can promise you That by the time that we get through The world will never ever be the same And you're to blame
Hey there Delilah You be good and don't you miss me Two more years and you'll be done with school And I'll be making history like I do
You'll know it's all because of you We can do whatever we want to Hey there Delilah here's to you This one's for you
Oh it's what you do to me Oh it's what you do to me Oh it's what you do to me Oh it's what you do to me What you do to me= lololoolol my friend or Delilah's boyfriend))