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Delilah's Casual outfit by VivaFariy Delilah's Casual outfit by VivaFariy
This is my OC Delilah's Casual outfit. I worked really hard on it and I'm satisfied.

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BASE: :iconhyperster:
Shirt Design: adopted from :icontypedoutmute:
Delilah and Drawing: :iconvivafariy:
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First of all, it's a good improvement.

But, as others have mentioned, in order to clean up your lines, use a pen tool. In GiMP, which I use as well, there is the Paths Tool. You can use this to curve and to trace lines. A note about the lines, a huge note: Don't make the lines of the clothing bigger than the lines of the base. It looks off and can be easily rectified by selecting a thinner stroking line.

Outlines are always a good thing to have- it gives it a more clean appearance.

In terms of the clothing, very cute. But you don't have to list credits on the image.

Hyperster has many bases in the .psd format- these make it very easy to change skin color, eye color, etc, when you lock the layer's transparency. Try utilizing this function next time. (need help? Note me.)
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AlisyaMagix Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The design is really nice! especially those shoes!!:squee:
Tip - make the top and bottom outline thiner and add outline to the hair,
but since you use gimp, which don't have a curve tool i think that's okay!;) but like I said, NICE!!
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